[General Contest] Power Updates

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PixelatedGlory

PixelatedGlory

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Character Edited: Kaliyan Saetai
App Link: link
Status: No change
Power Changes: Combined the humidity around him and winds that form around him when angry into one single "storm aura" and made the range equal for those. Combined his physique and non-aging into a single passive ability called "body of a god". Clarified that his anti-suffocation ability is not actively controlled and only takes effect if he is unable to breathe normally, as an emergency reflex.
Other Changes: Clarified that the annual nightmares and arm scarring take place over the whole week following his birthday. Also updated his age to 19 since today is his birthday.
 
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Sarrain

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Character Edited: Abigail "Abby" Woodman
App Link: Abby
Status: Power remains the same.
Power Changes:
  • Added a section to shapeshifting explaining what happens when her skin is damaged:
    When Abigail's seal skin is harmed when she isn't wearing it, this is excruciatingly painful for her. She feels the extent of the damage and whatever is inflicted on her seal skin will show up on her own body as well. Her seal skin heals at the same rate as her human body. Neither one can be wounded or unwounded separately.
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  • Added aura bracelet
Other Changes:
  • Fixed typos and grammatical errors.
  • Condensed application for more readability.
  • App size: 1,239
Staff: Pretty much the same, minus the added part to one of her abilities.
 
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Character Edited: Lyrseir Saetai
App Link: link
Status: No change
Power Changes: Removed some excess words on her calming effect. No change to its function or power level
Other Changes: Added resources field and clarified that she has plenty of money
 
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Boop

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Nov 30, 2016
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she, etc.
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Sarrain

Sarrain

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Character Edited: Audric/Audie Rathian
App Link: Here
Status: Same level all around.
Power Changes:
  • Added a clarification to his sexual reproduction section that is probably entirely unnecesary, but whatever.
  • Added aura bracelet
Other Changes:
  • Fixed spelling and grammatical errors.
  • Condensed application for more readability.
  • App size: 1,743
 
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Sarrain

Sarrain

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Character Edited: Caden Rhee
App Link: Reeeeee
Status: Same
Power Changes:
  • Combined Self-Sustenance and Semi-Immortality together to make things cleaner.
  • Mild wording changed on abilities, but the essence is the same.
Other Changes:
  • Condensed application for more readability.
  • App size: 1,718
 
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PixelatedGlory

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Character Edited: Alexis Brouillard
App Link: link
Status: No change
Power Changes: Combined human shape, dragon shape and flying into one single ability
Other Changes: Added resources section and noted his family is not helping him with that. Fixed a few instances where he was described as a dragon (he is a wyvern and proud of it)
 
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Sarrain

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Character Edited: Ceidwen Evans
App Link: This bish
Status: Ehhh... Downgrade? Very mild downgrade. Or the same. There's no improvement here.
Power Changes:
  • Removed "*Any new glamours will be threaded out." Also changed mention of gender to sex several times and improved the overall wording to let it flow better. Changed the description of glamour in this power to better help people understand how it works.
  • Combined Love is Addictive with Love Addicted.
  • Hiraeth is super gone.
Other Changes:
  • Condensed application for more readability.
  • App size: 2,137
 
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Character Edited: Demera Isra-Meng
App Link: Me booooi
Status: Downgrade
Power Changes:
  • Downgraded his universal language charm to a simple one.
  • Combined 'mentally consumed' weakness with his deduction power as a limitation instead.
Other Changes:
  • Condensed application for more readability.
  • App size: 1,403
 
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Sarrain

Sarrain

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Character Edited: Eroshay "Shay"
App Link: Shay bae
Status: Downgrade...?
Power Changes:
  • Literally combined all the umbra staff's sub-abilities into one giant thing.
  • I've decided to entirely rid Shay of her "death sense" ability.
  • Removed "she's stuck in limbo forever, never able to move on." Added "she dies forever.", because I missed it after Angelo gave up his Reaper...ness to fix Shay.
  • Took away "unstable magic" from weaknesses because it is redundant with her "reactive magic" ability.
  • Removed Shay's "opposite's collide" ability. Again redundancy to one of her weaknesses.
  • Combined "spirit beacon" with "mediumship."
  • Removed "emotional overdrive" from her weaknesses, as it's a limitation covered in "hope empowerment."
  • Removed possession from "possession & detection" and changed it to "dark detection"
  • Took away this "She is also capable of manifesting brief views of the same thing using the umbrella as a type of wand. Although, these manifestations last only around a minute at the most." from the umbrella.
Other Changes:
  • Condensed application for more readability.
  • App size: 2,061
 
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