Hey. This is pretty much where I will post my poetry. Beware, much of it is fairly depressing and relates to death, commonly suicide. I went through a depressed/goth/death phase recently, and occasionally relapse. Currently I'm a nonconformist :P.
By the way, feel free to give feedback. Just...if you don't like my poetry have a go at it, not me. And don't really have a go at it. Just kinda...be gentle. I don't really respond very well to negativity.
Falling
Falling feels like flying,
Wind whistles in my ear.
I stretch my body open,
Clothes flap everywhere.
I see the ground draw closer,
And I watch the ground draw nearer,
Falling feels like flying,
Until you hit the ground.
By the way, feel free to give feedback. Just...if you don't like my poetry have a go at it, not me. And don't really have a go at it. Just kinda...be gentle. I don't really respond very well to negativity.
Falling
Falling feels like flying,
Wind whistles in my ear.
I stretch my body open,
Clothes flap everywhere.
I see the ground draw closer,
And I watch the ground draw nearer,
Falling feels like flying,
Until you hit the ground.