Darzih Upgrade and Clarification

Keen

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Adding a passive to Darzih I forgot (which I feel makes sense considering his background) and clarifying a power that gets a lot of confusion.

This is going under his passive bullet points

The atmosphere Darzih is in does not affect him. He can fly as high as he pleases, breathe poisonous gas, or experience an intense change in atmosphere with no problem. As long as there's air to breathe, he can breathe it.

Magic Touch: When those attuned to magic look at Darzih, they know that he's filled with powerful magic and a large pool of mana. Specifically, his horn and halos radiate the most magic. The closer you get to him, the stronger the signal he sends out. When touching Darzih, people and objects with magic will find their magic 20% stronger. When touching his horn, nails, hooves, or halo, their magic is 50% stronger.

Removing the part about how getting closer to him makes the signal he sends out stronger. It doesn't make sense since the power is based on instant knowledge. Also clarified the second sentence.

Magic Touch: When those attuned to magic look at Darzih, they know that he's filled with powerful magic and a large pool of mana. They'll know that his horn and halos radiate the most magic. When touching Darzih, people and objects with magic will find their magic 20% stronger. When touching his horn, nails, hooves, or halo, their magic is 50% stronger.
 

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Top's a clarification, bottom is a new weak ability. 5 posts.
 

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